Draft Variations for Return of the Jedi
by Jenn Dolari
Paraphrased From Star Wars: The Annotated Scripts (by Laurent Bouzereau).
::ROUGH DRAFT::
Roll up mentions TWO Death Stars. After the roll up, the camera pans down to the planet of Had Abbadon, the Imperial capital planet. It is almost entirely urban, extremely overpopulated and polluted heavily.
Draft Variations for The Empire Strikes Back
by Jenn Dolari
::NOTES FROM THE OTHER DRAFTS::
-=Story Conferences=-
There is a Water planet
Ttaz = Rock planet with cavemen
Hoth/Ketbrae/Kettlebrae = Cloud City
LOOKING BACK TO THE FUTURE OF STAR WARS
By John L. Flynn
“A Long Time Ago… In A Galaxy Far, Far Away….”
THE ORIGINS OF STAR WARS: EVOLUTION OF A SPACE SAGA
By John L. Flynn
The Development Of Star Wars: A New Hope
by Brendon Wahlberg
The Development Of Star Wars: A New Hope Version 3.0, Third Draft available (Version 1.0 Second Draft available; Version 2.0 First Outline and First Draft available)
THE DEVELOPMENT OF STAR WARS
AS SEEN THROUGH THE SCRIPTS BY GEORGE LUCAS
JAN HELANDER
DEPARTMENT OF COMMUNICATION AND LANGUAGES
LULEÅ UNIVERSITY OF TECHNOLOGY
MARCH 1997
Table of Contents
Randy & Jean-Marc Lofficier wrote an essay in 1983 about the genesis of the SW scripts. The article was published in a French Sci-fi magazine. In 1987, the article was printed in English in STARLOG’s SW issue. This article was one of the first ever to deal with the original scripts. This article is reprinted in its entirety with full permission from the author. You can find the original article at http://www.lofficier.com/starwars.htm.
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